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cspainey January 21st, 2008, 4:35 am

So hey there, any of you fine people wanna help me out? I'm updating from college and need opinions on something!

Which of the following d'ya reckon would be the best name for an environmentally-aware (almost propaganda level) children's fairy tale?

-The Hole in the Sky
-The Man who Mended the Sky
-The Sky of Smoke
-The Sky of Smoke and Flame
-The Lost Caps of Ice
-The Princess and the Towers of Smoke
-The Wings of Smog
-The Land of Fog

It's supposed to sound smarmy and big-headed, so don't worry :P

And I know I haven't been too good with updates lately, but trust me I think this is going to make for something interesting! (Deadline's in 10 days, so you'll be able to see the outcome then ^_^)

Gotta go now, but would be grateful if anyone could help out here! Thanks!

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bread4311 January 21st, 2008, 4:42 am

hmmm.....The Man Who Mended The Sky is a good one for kids....it is obvious, and easily understood, or imagined (which is the easy part for kids :P)

the Princess and the Towers of Smoke might make all the lads in the room instantly lose interest lol. they might think it is another "barbie-esk" story for girls.

Ele_Mental January 21st, 2008, 7:18 am

I agree with bread. (There's a sentence I never thought I'd say.)
"The Man Who Mended the Sky" seems like the best title.

Pickles January 21st, 2008, 8:46 am

I prefer the hole in the sky. It's more simple and kids like that.

Taerl January 21st, 2008, 11:57 am

"The Man Who Mended The Sky" sounds best for children. :3

three January 21st, 2008, 12:18 pm

I'll have to go with pickles and say "The Hole in the Sky". "The Man Who Mended the Sky" is kind of a mouthfull.

AFStaff January 21st, 2008, 12:59 pm

"The Hole in the Sky"

cspainey January 22nd, 2008, 3:45 am

Woo, thanks for the response all! Wanted to get on sooner but alas, Virgin Media has failed at providing internets >.< so can only really get on at college.

A pretty close call between "The Hole in the Sky" and "The Man who Mended the Sky" - but the latter just came out ahead in the overall survey!

Also Smeagol92055 - said man is going to be fashioned more than a little on Mr Gore ;D which is kinda worrying considering who the guy in question already is!

9 days and I'll have somethin' to show you all! Thanks again everybody!
Take it easy ^_^


EDIT: Deadline's been moved to Monday, but I should still be meeting the original - so Thursday (or Friday, depending on how much time's left after college) I'll be uploading everything for you guys to see!

Jallice (Guest) June 29th, 2008, 1:59 pm

Go with "The Man who Mended the Sky". There's already a book "A hole in the sky" or world... something like that anyways. Good book. =3